Stopping on page 41 because of the lengthy, unneeded character descriptions.
"The taller of the two, a dark-haired man, was wearing an open plaid sport shirt over his tee. His beard and mustache were neatly trimmed. The smaller man had medium brown hair; he was clean-shaven" (28).
I don't care what these people are wearing. I really don't.
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